Saturday, April 18, 2009

Villains

I know people sometimes read horrible things in books and become appalled. I recall hearing how Stephen King has gotten hate mail for years about a scene in The Dead Zone where Greg Stillson kills a dog while trying to sell bibles. It's a rough scene, but Stillson does other terrible acts throughout that novel, but none hit that same emotional edge as when he kills that dog.

I recall also how in Critical Space, Greg Rucka uses the assassin Oxford to kill several long-time characters, one with calculated and false sexual overtones, another with cold, fast precision. A lot of Atticus Kodiak fans have problems with Critical Space, especially given his entanglements with the villain of Smoker, Drama.

Of course when people think of great villains, they like to bring up Hannibal Lecter or Darth Vader. These are great bad guys, but they are more dark shadows of ourselves, each showing different levels of charisma. In a lot of ways, these guys are known more for their charisma than for the horrible acts they play out. (Both Lecter and Vader do their most awful deeds off screen.)

I bring these thoughts up because I've been working on a way to get more use out of Delilah (Bridgett's best friend) in Vitamin F. The only flaw in doing this, is that I have to immerse myself in writing horrible acts, terrorists torturing and coercing people to achieve a desired effect. In a lot of ways, I'm doing this because I need the audience to hate Adam John and the Brotherhood of Life. But to hate them, they have to do the most vile things possible, with total disregard of any opinions other than their own.

Villains have to do horrible, terrible things to truly be worthwhile.

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Wednesday, April 01, 2009

Recruits

I managed to get two more people to at least express interest in reading my work today. Plus, yesterday I realized there was someone I should have asked about Vitamin F a long time ago.

Why the sudden shift? Why the beta reader recruitment drive? I was reading "The Warrior," by Jim Butcher (it's the newest Dresden Files novella) and it ends with a character remarking how people rarely take the choices they're offered to make their lives better. That's absolutely true and I knew that I needed to do something to get my act in gear.

By the end of the week, at last two people will have read my work for the first time. One of those was earlier today and was pretty close to the target demographic for Vitamin F.

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