Finding Flaws

My recent discussions with a few people have helped me see what areas of Vitamin F really need work. I'm going to keep going on the current draft of course, if for no other reason than to lay a foundation for the real work that draft three will bring with it.

I think the next move, once I've finished with draft two and put forth an attempt at getting an agent, will have to be making a list of what needs to be fixed, chapter by chapter.

In the past couple of days, I've had a few real fights with the last fifth of the book. The tough stuff is still just that. I'll get through it.